Not much to this, just a linear rendition of a short story of mine, but with a stab at some effects. Definitely needs polish - and maybe some branching...

http://www.textadventures.co.uk/review/1144/

A good coder and a good writer, I am looking for your first real Quest text adventure!

Thanks very much!

Hey, I really liked it! I mean, it ain't the kind of thing I usually come to this site for but it was... refreshing somehow ^_^ And a good little snippet story!

Thanks much!

Jaynabonne that was really excellent. Usually I'm not really encased in anything like that but this caught my eye and kept me reading to the end. Nice words for a wordsmith and a unusual approach, Liked it. Get on with the full version lol will play that one. Terry. Happy adventuring

Thanks, Terry. I'm glad you liked it. We'll see if I expand this or just roll the techniques over to something else.